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diner-roger-bultot

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

She waited for him at the diner as planned. He’d be here at six o’clock. Evelyn checked her watch, six-fifteen. She shifted on the barstool and smoothed out her full skirt.

Laughter rang out from the entrance. Mary Jane walked in. He was right beside her, laughing too. Evelyn ducked behind the counter. I’m a fool! He didn’t mean any of it. She crept out by the side entrance, unnoticed. Pete said goodbye to Mary Jane and waited at the counter as planned. Six-twenty. He was ten minutes early.

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Friday flash fiction from FRIDAY FICTIONEERS (Rochelle)

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FabricatingFiction

Dec 22, 2016

Aww such a shame!

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rochellewisoff

Dec 25, 2016

Dear Fatima,

Oh, that hurts. Such a communication breakdown. Well written. And…Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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1. FFDwrites
  
  Dec 25, 2016
  
  Dear Rochelle
  Thanks so much. It was so much fun writing it too. I’m glad to be part of the Fictioneers.
  Salaam *peace*
  
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neilmacdon

Dec 25, 2016

That’s quite a debut. Welcome

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1. FFDwrites
  
  Dec 25, 2016
  
  Thank you, Neil for the warm welcome. 😊
  
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DebraB

Dec 27, 2016

Oh, darn it! Nice story!

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1. Fatima Fakier Deria
  
  Dec 28, 2016
  
  Dear Debra, thank you for reading. 😊
  
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