Revival

photo prompt ©majesticgoldenrose

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Hi FFAW, I’m new on this flash fiction challenge. I look forward to meeting all of you.

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Earl eyed the calf peering at him through the gate. A warm glow bloomed in his chest. The calf was yet another product of his labour over the years.

The warm glow receded as a memory pushed to the surface. Empty dams and empty warehouses. Subsidised bags of grain arriving on government vehicles, at first enough to get through the season, but later cut by half. He, and the other farmers, were forced to let their cattle roam in search of grass growing on the side of the highways. If they didn’t die from starvation, they were killed by trucks. When they herded them home, Earl pitied their bony frames. Cattle should never be bony.

A low bleating moan pierced the air and the memories evaporated. He smiled. A cow in labour. His herd, and balance sheet, just expanded. The air smelled musty. He didn’t have to look up at the dark clouds gathering to know that more rain was coming.

 

161 words

Written for Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers, a challenge to write an entire story in 100 – to 175 words.

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  1. Priceless Joy avatar

    Lovely story! The birth of a new calf brings on much needed rain and hopes of a brighter future! Welcome to the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us!

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Thank you for your warm welcome! And thanks for reading.

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      1. Priceless Joy avatar

        My pleasure!

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  2. Jade M. Wong avatar

    Love your take on the photo prompt. It’s a lovely story of new beginnings 🙂

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  3. Iain Kelly avatar

    Glad to see you here. Lovely take 🙂

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  4. milliethom avatar

    A lovely story that ends with the promise of happier times ahead for Earl. 😃

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  5. michael1148humphris avatar

    Many farmers would relate so well to this story as it illustrated so well the ups and downs in farming.

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Thank you Michael. I drew from our country’s situation these last few years. And glad to say it is in revival after severe drought. Fat cows and good crops. Thanks again.

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  6. majesticgoldenrose avatar

    Hi, I’m majesticgoldenrose, and I am glad you used my prompt. Great post, btw! I love how you include a lot detail of the weather and highways. Its very imaginative!

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  7. jacquelineobyikocha avatar

    I like the hopeful note of your story. A new life and better finances, and rain too 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Yes hope keeps us going doesn’t it? Thank you Jacqueline!

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  8. Kelly avatar

    Apprreciate this blog post

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