A hidden heirloom

 

Photo prompt provided by Louise with The Storyteller’s Abode. Thank you Louise!

The colours drew him into another world and he was lost. Lost in the most beautiful of escapes. The painting was exquisite. The subtle touches of light against dark, the soft brush strokes conveying the tone of the entire painting; tranquility.

The chatter of people brought him back to the real world. For once he was glad to be in the world of the living. He was next in line to have the antiquity examined at the travelling roadshow of experts. The sun was out, the surrounding fields a spring green. Like a painting. He smiled to himself. He was a living subject of this delicate work of art.

Passed down through his grandmother, it was hidden in the corridors and attics of his family. He needed expert confirmation. Because if it was authentic, it would mean an undiscovered masterpiece.

The expert in arts and literatures bent to examine the canvas, the signature and the layers of paint. He frowned, then straightened slowly, his mouth numbly conveying the sweetest words. “It’s a Monet…”

 

173 words

Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) where the challenge is to write 100 to 175 words based on the prompt.  Click the link to view more stories.

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Responses

  1. Priceless Joy avatar

    Wow! What a great ending! Such a lovely story! He has a priceless painting!

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Wouldn’t we all love to discover that antique that is worth a small fortune. Lol. Thanks for reading.

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      1. Priceless Joy avatar

        Yes!! 😀 😀

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  2. Iain Kelly avatar

    Would love to find an old painting hidden away I’m the loft and discover it was worth millions! Nice take.

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  3. athling2001 avatar

    Great story and I love your take. And the ending.

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Thank you for reading. And your feedback too is most appreciated!

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  4. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    I like a happy ending and they come much happier than this! Absolutely delightful.
    My tale is called ‘One beautiful day’

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  5. Singledust avatar

    such a discovery! all the sweeter i suppose as it was loved before it became a treasure. lovely story

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Thank you for reading 😊

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      1. Singledust avatar

        My pleasure!

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  6. michael1148humphris avatar

    I love Monet’s style, well done

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Thank you Michael. I do too 😊

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  7. Chris C. avatar

    I wonder how many more paintings are hidden away, waiting to be discovered? Lovely story!

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  8. tedstrutz avatar

    I enjoyed your story. The start of a larger piece? Or a movie? The world awaits, Fatima.

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Oh thank you so much Ted!

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  9. JoHawkTheWriter avatar

    LOL Great story. I am still searching for the priceless treasure my family left for me. They have hidden it well. 😉

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  10. Jade M. Wong avatar

    Oooh, it’s an undiscovered masterpiece! Loved this 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      I’m so very glad you did!

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  11. neelwritesblog avatar

    What a wonderful and uplifting story. The guy has a Monet. Priceless, your story too.

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    1. Fatima Fakier Deria avatar

      Felt like doing something more cheery. Thank you Neel. 😊

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