The magic within

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They were coming! He tripped over roots and rocks and sliced his hands and knees.

In his mind he saw only his daughter. Would Little Ayla understand? He spent a lifetime locked in his cramped room writing books by oil lamps. And now those books were burned to ash, by the orders of the government who sought to punish him for disobedience and disruption. What did he know of disruption? He was a teacher not a warrior.

All he did was show his students their inner power. Revolution had sprung.

Panting, he thought it odd that even in this moment, he had inspiration. He would write and teach till his last breath. Dipping his finger in the blood that trickled from his slivered palm, he wrote on the sleeve of his robe.

A sharp pain pierced his shoulder, and when he reached towards it he pulled out an arrow. He could barely hear the sounds of horsemen approaching and as he fell his eyes rested on his own script on his sleeve, Love yourself.

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The image was so evocative of magic and I’ve been reading about true self love as opposed to regular TLC. True self love is more difficult and life changing. And it is our own inner magic in a way. So this is where my mind took me when I saw this image. Thank you to Goroyboy for providing it for this week’s prompt!

Written for FFfAW (Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers).

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Responses

  1. pennygadd51 avatar

    Dear Fatima
    What a wonderful story! It pulled me in with great power, kept me enthralled, and finally released me with the intensely important message “Love yourself”. May I reblog it, please?

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Ooh yes please reblog!
      Thank you Penny for such wonderful encouraging feedback. 😀

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  2. pennygadd51 avatar

    Reblogged this on Autumn Leaves and commented:
    This story was written by Fatima Fakier for the flash fiction challenge “Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers”.
    I think it’s a wonderful story! It pulled me in with great power, kept me enthralled, and finally released me with an intensely important message.
    I hope you enjoy it!

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  3. Lynn Love avatar

    A well written tale, Fatima, so emotional and heartbreaking, but with a hopeful tone at the end. One man dies, but his teaching will live on. Wonderful

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Lynn 😊 well he hoped it would live on as all his life’s work was destroyed. Who knows the effect it has on the person who sees it? Thanks for reading Lynn

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      1. Lynn Love avatar

        My pleasure 🙂

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  4. Iain Kelly avatar

    Such a dramatic piece, very well written.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Definitely dramatic! Thanks Iain.

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  5. Priceless Joy avatar

    Wonderful story Fatima! So very sad that he died as he would have contributed a great deal to the teaching of students. Love the story!

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  6. goroyboy avatar

    The pen(quill) IS mightier than the sword! Great emotional build up Fatima.

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  7. yarnspinnerr avatar

    An exquisite tale. Kudos.

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