Sunday lunch

 

She leaned back in the chair, the cold wrought iron pressing into her back. Through her grief a smile rose to her mouth. Countless Sunday lunches, warm garlic breads and ice cold lemonades. She could almost hear the chatter, the laughter ringing around the table. Young and old.

A hand touched her shoulder, she didn’t have to look to know it was her brother, Barry.

“C’mon sis, I’ll make you some tea. Let’s go inside.”

She stood up and took one last look at the chair where Dad always sat. Sunday lunch would not be the same without him.

99 words

Hooray! My picture was chosen for this week’s flash fiction, and I couldn’t be more thrilled! Thank you, group leader, Rochelle!!!!I took this picture while on holiday, and the lodge I was staying at had a sombre air about it. Later I heard from hotel the hotel staff that the father of the family-run business had just passed away. So naturally their story came to mind.

I apologise for not commenting  much on last week’s flash fiction. Life has thrown me major life changes which has given me the most confusing mix of incredible joy and sadness at the same time. I promise to double my efforts this week and read as many of this week’s posts as I can.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by the most talented artist and writer, Rochelle Wiesoff-Fields. The challenge is to write a story in 100 words or less. Click the blue frog icon to read more awesome flash fiction by more great writers. Make coffee, sit back and enjoy 30 second stories.

 

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Responses

  1. Iain Kelly avatar

    Such a touching scene, beautifully rendered.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Iain!

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  2. neilmacdon avatar

    That’s interesting to know the history behind the picture. It does say “absences”

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Neil 🙂

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  3. larry trasciatti avatar

    Sad realistic depiction of hard circumstances

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Larry. I was hoping it would come across that way.

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  4. Moon avatar

    Beautiful story, as ever.
    I hope to be able to invest time enough on my children so they have happy memories to hold on to, when I am gone.
    Thanks so much for this week’s photo, Fatima.

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    1. Moon avatar

      That was ‘ enough time’. Sorry.🙂

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    2. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Your children will have the most beautiful memories of you, I’m sure! Thank you, Moon.

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  5. Tracey@MyBajaKitchen.com and TraceyDelaplainMD.com avatar

    Thank you for the prompt. It brought me out of a slump. Your story was heartfelt.
    Tracey

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Well glad I could help, Tracey!

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  6. Irene Waters 19 Writer Memoirist avatar

    That empty seat is a hard one – particularly in the early days of the bereavement. Thank you for the prompt picture and the story behind the picture.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I agree. Thank you, Irene 🙂

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  7. Lynn Love avatar

    A great photo that inspired many a sinister and sad story – all those empty chairs. Yours was equally touching – such a sense of loss, subtly done. Lovely story Fatima

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I’m glad you found it moving, Lynn. Thank you!

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      1. Lynn Love avatar

        My pleasure Fatima

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  8. Sandra avatar

    Lovely story, and a lovely picture too, thank you.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Sandra! I’m glad you liked it.

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  9. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    Such a lovely story to go with your equally lovely photo. Her sadness was tangible. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you for choosing my photo this week, Rochelle!

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  10. Dale avatar

    In agreement with everyone. This is a lovely story indeed. Nice touch to add a bit of real life to it.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Real life makes for the best stories, thank you so much, Dale!

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  11. lisarey1990 avatar

    Great story. Very heartfelt and beautiful.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Lisa. I’m glad it touched your heart. That’s when I know I did it right.

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  12. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    A poignant piece indeed, and beautifully written. Thanks for providing the photo. It’s certainly inspired a variety of takes.

    Click to read my 99 words!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Keith. Can’t wait to read yours and everyone else’s.

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  13. yarnspinnerr avatar

    Touching piece. Well crafted.

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  14. pennygadd51 avatar

    A simple story, told with delicacy and precision. You capture the sense of the absent father beautifully. I like the way you have the brother reach out to her, and make her a cup of tea.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      It is usually in those difficult times that the depth and strength of family bonds emerge. Thank you, Penny for your wonderful feedback 🙂 Always glad to hear from you.

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  15. spicedmullings avatar

    Simply beautiful!
    We will always those who have left us!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Yes, we will always have them with us in some way. Thank you for your kind comments.

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  16. anuragbakhshi avatar

    How touching…and so beautifully written. Also, thanks for the pic Fatima.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      You’re most welcome, I’m just so happy it was selected this week! Thank you for your feedback, glad it moved you. 🙂

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  17. James McEwan avatar

    My heart goes out to you and wish you well. I hope writing the story made a difference to you.

    Great picture – do you know the species of tree. I ask because so far reading through people’s contributions we have, an oak, cypress, cedar, pine and a yew -n at least we all agree it is a tree.
    Best regards,

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you for you kind thoughts. I really appreciate it, James. Writing is cathartic, it’s true. I think the tree is some type of pine tree. I’m not too sure of the specific species. And I’m not sure if it is indigenous to the area, which is the Garden route in South Africa. But definitely some type of pine tree.

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  18. michael1148humphris avatar

    Lunch is never quite the same without those we loved being present, a fine story and picture.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I agree. I had imagined that bereaved family having sat around that very table having all sorts of get-togethers throughout the seasons. Thank you, Michael.

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  19. granonine avatar

    Sad and sweet at the same time. Nicely done.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Granonie 🙂

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  20. Friends Forever – Stories and more avatar

    […] Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting the challenge and Fatima Fakier Deria for the photo prompt. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt click […]

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  21. Dahlia avatar

    I completely empathized with your beautiful piece. Thank you for a lovely photo and also for sharing the background. Interestingly the picture spoke to me in a similar fashion 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Dahlia. I look forward to reading your flash fiction!

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  22. Dan Bohn avatar

    I loved “Sunday Lunch” I think many people can relate to those reflection times. Tender memories Fatima. Great photo too.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Reflection of those who have moved on have cropped up in many flash fiction posts this week, so you’re spot on there. Thank you, Dan!

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  23. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    Love how you captured the mood of the empty chairs… and thank you for the picture.

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  24. gahlearner avatar

    A sad, but also beautiful story. Great atmosphere. And thank you for the picture, it finally brought me back from a long ‘no ideas’ phase.

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  25. Sascha Darlington avatar

    Evocative picture, Fatima. You’ve given us so many stories.
    I loved your story. We always feel for those empty chairs. And in this one for the father. So well done!

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  26. Russell Gayer avatar

    That’s for the photo. Empty chairs, especially around a holiday, make us think of those who have passed on. I loved the brother’s compassion in this story. Well done.

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  27. Jan Vanek avatar

    Beautiful photo prompt and story to go along with it. My story was about a dad’s passing, too, though my character still managed to have a tea party with him. 🙂 Thanks for the prompt. I’ve enjoyed the variety of stories it inspired! Hope whatever is going on in your life brings more joy than sadness.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Jan. I did enjoy your take on the prompt. Glad you liked mine too. 😊

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  28. athling2001 avatar

    Touching memories.

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