Flux23

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Flux23 dropped to her knees, panting on the rooftop of the skyscraper. In seconds she morphed from a suit-wearing white male into herself. Brown hair and pale skin. A blue scaly patch behind her ear the only tell-tale sign of what she was.

The city lights blurred in front of her. She felt woozy. That little girl caught her unawares, staring at her, then at her father lying in a pool of blood. She threw the gun into an air vent. They’ll catch up to her. She would run anyway. Her life as an assassin for Nation444 was over.

99 words

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words of less. Thanks to Jill Wisoff for this week’s prompt!

Every week I intend to write comedy, and everything but comedy finds its way onto the post. This week, it is sci-fi. Shapeshifters. Loosely based on the X-men character, Mystique.

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  1. neilmacdon avatar

    I think she still has a chance

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  2. Iain Kelly avatar

    A gripping action scene.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Iain. 🙂

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  3. Dale avatar

    Good, tense writing there, Fatima! I hope that life can be over for her, though it rarely is.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      She’s set on a new path for sure. In the end, I think she makes it 😉 Thank you, Dale.

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  4. yarnspinnerr avatar
    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, YN 🙂

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  5. James Pyles avatar

    Now I want to know what Nation444 is.

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    1. Varad avatar

      I’d like to know more about them as well and Flux23

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    2. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Me and you both! If I take a guess, they’d be some kind of dictatorship enslaving mutants for their own greed and destruction. Flux23 would be one of many mutants enslaved to this regime.

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  6. Susan A Eames avatar

    You captured her tense situation beautifully. Well crafted story.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I’m really glad you think so, Susan!

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    The life as an assassin is not fun when you have to face your conscious

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      In a way she is discovering herself and who she wants to be. And assassin was not it.

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  8. anuragbakhshi avatar

    A tense action thriller.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar
    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Keith!

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  9. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    It sounds like Flux23 discovered her conscience. Not a good thing for an assassin. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      She is set for a different path from now on and will have to fight for it. Thank you, Rochelle.

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  10. Liz Young avatar

    At least this alien has a conscience – or develops one.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      It was always there, I suppose, just she was forced into being an assassin by Nation444. And she couldn’t do it anymore.

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  11. pennygadd51 avatar

    I get the impression that you don’t retire as an assassin for Nation444, and neither are you made redundant. Terminated sounds more likely…

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      That’s exactly it, Penny! Enslaved by Nation444 and now she wants out and will have to fight for it! And I suppose in the process, free the rest of the enslaved mutants and probably start a revolution.. (wow, the story is developing!) Thank you, Penny.

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      1. pennygadd51 avatar

        Write it! Write it! Write the story!

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  12. granonine avatar

    This is such an imaginative take on the prompt. I’ve always been fascinated by the idea of shape-shifters. Good one.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Granonine. 🙂 Shape-shifters are very intriguing!

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  13. jillyfunnell avatar

    Clever choice of name for her! I do love a shape-shifter. Well done.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Jilly! I struggled with it, but glad I found one that worked.

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  14. lisarey1990 avatar

    Very gripping.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Lisa!

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  15. shivamt25 avatar

    An exciting tale! I love mystique in Xmen. Seems like they have increased her role in the recent movies.

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  16. gahlearner avatar

    A shape-shifting Alien, an exciting plot, tense and well-paced writing. What’s not to like? 🙂

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  17. Mike avatar

    This was a story which left me wanting to know more, great

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