Italian inspiration

As much as Madame Christie enjoyed Venice she was anxious to get going.  “Whatever is the holdup, Christo?” she snapped at the receptionist.

“I am sorry Signora Christie, but we cannot check you out.”

“Excuse me?!”

“Orders from Investigatore Alfonsi.” Christo pointed at a gentleman in uniform, who spoke above the hum of agitated guests gathering in the lobby.

“Listen closely everybody! Last night a couple was murdered in their beds. Nobody is allowed to leave without being interviewed.”

He twirled the ends of his moustache. Madame Christie knew she had the perfect character for her next series of novels.

100 words

 

Unfortunately I have not been able to write for some time due to many upsets in seemingly every area of life. I’m keen to think of this phase as transformation and not the mess that it is. To create, one must first destroy. Applies to many things beyond cooking and other creative pursuits.

SO when I sat down to write this week’s flash fiction, I was pleasantly surprised to see my photo as the prompt. I suspect it was our group leader, Rochelle’s way of sending a smoke signal my way to get back to writing!

Can’t wait to read everyone’s flash fiction.

This was written for Friday Fictioneers, a weekly challenge to write a story in 100 words or less. Hosted by leading author, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.

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Responses

  1. larry trasciatti avatar

    Madame Christie led such a very interesting life. How convenient for a writer of her kind that she just happened to have been present at such a scene.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I pictured this happening before her success as mystery writer. The locked-room mystery she found herself in giving her the inspiration for her Poirot novels. This is more fiction than truth, mind you! I have no idea where her inspiration came from.

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  2. trentpmcd avatar

    It would be nice to think that she did have such inspiration for her novels. Thinking of inspiration, it looks like you gain inspiration from our leader’s historical fiction using famous people before they were famous. Well done.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Rochelle’s posts are inspiring, and it appeals to my love for history too. Thanks Trent!

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  3. Russell Gayer avatar

    What a fun read. Inspiration is where you find it. I’ve written several short stories based upon people and events that I observed from a distance. Good characters are out there. When we find one we can use as a writer I consider it a blessing.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      They say observing people is what writers do.

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  4. neilmacdon avatar

    What a capacity for revenge we have. “Don’t mess me around or I’ll put you in a novel”

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      haha! To remember their flaws and mistakes forever

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  5. Sarah Ann avatar

    A lovely little insight into where Hercule might have come from. 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Sarah!

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  6. Dale avatar

    This was a fun take for sure. All my stories come from something or another… most of them real life!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Art is a reflection of life!

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      1. Dale avatar

        Indeed!

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  7. jillyfunnell avatar

    I love your story – the tiny detail of the twirled moustache leading Madame Christie to create one of her most fully-formed and memorable characters. Great stuff.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      He was a memorable character, I enjoyed him the most in Murder on The Orient Express.

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  8. pennygadd51 avatar

    Great take on the prompt! You nicely capture the style of a murder mystery of the 1930s, and your dialogue is very good.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Penny! I was aiming for the locked-room mystery style.

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  9. Dahlia avatar

    I enjoyed this piece very much – Christie and her character are my favorites! Thanks for the photo Fatima 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Dahlia!

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  10. michaelwynnauthor avatar

    This was very enjoyable and perhaps that’s how it did happen.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      WEll , if Agatha Christie was anything like us writers, it is likely so. Thank you, Michael.

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  11. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    I’m confessing to nothing. 😉 But I’m really happy to see you back this week. I love where your own photo took you. Wonderfully told.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Rochelle!

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  12. granonine avatar

    I was delighted to see the picture of all those books again 🙂 Loved your story.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Granonine!

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  13. draliman avatar

    I thought she was going to cause a “do you know who I am?” type of scene but it looks like this is going to be a good thing for her!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      She certainly had the potential for that the way she was portrayed in my story! Thank you.

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