Belle of the ball

PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

 

Her dress was a cornflour blue, the same colour as her eyes. The latest fashion in a princess line style, puffed sleeves and lace trim. Now half of it was covered in grime from the cramped dungeon she woke up in after the ball. Nine days ago. Once a day a meal was shoved through a flap in the door. Then the music would play. Was it Mozart or Bach? Drifting down to her dungeon, through the floors and the walls from somewhere above where her captor waited. If only she knew what they were waiting for.

97 words

What an inspiring picture of musical instruments for this week’s prompt, courtesy of Rochelle. Took me to a dark place in 19th century England it seems. Admittedly not my best. But hope you enjoyed it anyway.

Written for Friday Fictioneers led by author Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less.

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Responses

  1. neilmacdon avatar

    That will teach her to get in pumpkin coaches. The spell wore off

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      AS soon as I read your comment I realised my character could easily have been Cinderella, with her cornflour blue dress!

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      1. neilmacdon avatar

        I thought the reference was deliberate. I’m a big fan of using references or echoes to expand the depth available in 100 words

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      2. Fatima Fakier avatar

        Must have done it subconsciously 😊

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  2. Iain Kelly avatar

    Not how you want the ball to end…

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      No, perhaps an after party of sorts, but nothing like this – that never ends.

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  3. 4963andypop avatar

    A frog prince, perhaps? Nice description of a dismal situation. She is a trifle overdressed!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you! glad you enjoyed it.

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      1. 4963andypop avatar

        I said frog referring obliquely to the inLinkz logo. 🐸🐸🐸

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      2. Fatima Fakier avatar

        Hahaha! I didn’t realise

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  4. Sascha Darlington avatar

    mysterious and sad.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Sascha.

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  5. Dale avatar

    Must watch your drink at all times or someone will put something in it and you’ll wake up captive for reasons you know not!!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Scary how real this possibility is for women.

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      1. Dale avatar

        And sad…

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  6. michaelwynnauthor avatar

    Sinister, I wonder what they are waiting for

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      An 19th century human trafficking ring? the mystery terrifies.

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  7. anuragbakhshi avatar

    That was creepy. Well done.

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  8. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    I wonder how long she’ll have to wait to discover what they are waiting for. Intriguing.

    Click to read my FriFic tale

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Me and you both, Keith!

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  9. yarnspinnerr avatar

    A lovely word painting.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you. Love that!

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  10. granonine avatar

    Oy. What an awful predicament.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Wouldn’t want to be her.

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  11. Susan A Eames avatar

    Dark and scary but so well written!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I tend to write dark stuff. Thank you, Susan.

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  12. lisarey1990 avatar

    Whoa, creepy!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Would hate to be her. Thank you, Lisa!

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  13. prior.. avatar

    I enjoyed the fresh take of flashing back to a dungeon and fairy tale vibe – and loved the cornflour blue for some reason – nice imagery

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Cinderella all gone wrong it seems. Thank you!

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      1. prior.. avatar

        yes….

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  14. plaridel avatar

    i think they’re waiting for christmas.

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  15. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    That must’ve been some ball. I thought this could be the dark side of Cinderella, too. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  16. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    That does not sound like a prince you would marry… more like a Bluebird collector.

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  17. Sandra avatar

    The waiting adds an extra-cruel dimension to the plot. Well done.

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  18. jillyfunnell avatar

    I think her fairy godmother needs to get her wand serviced because things don’t seem to have gone at all to plan here. Good story!

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