Like Father, Like Son

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“You’re just like your father”, remarked Robert lazily.

Marcus raised an eyebrow, “He’s your father too.” Then picked up the whiskey canister, “And no I am not.”

“I have the good fortune of having fallen very far from the tree.”

“Oh shut up!”

“See that’s just what Father says to me.”

“For the last time, I am not going on some reckless, un-planned, crazy-as-shit adventure of yours to the Galapagos islands!”

“Comfort zones. Careless mediocrity. Whiskey… like father, like son.”

Marcus held the whiskey canister above his glass. Cautiously sat it back on the table. “When do we leave?”

99 words

 Something about the house and the setting sun made me think of family and adventures. And I so much wanted to experiment with humour and dialogue today. Hope you enjoy this!

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Challenge is to write a full story in 100 words or less.

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Responses

  1. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    Robert has Marcus’ number, doesn’t he? I hope it’s a grand adventure for both of them. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      That’s for another story, but it’s a grand one for sure 😉

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  2. neilmacdon avatar

    Marcus should have known better than to let himself be so easily goaded. But, on the other hand, it may be good for him

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      He will have a lot of fun, but I doubt he’ll admit it to his brother.

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  3. ellenbest24 avatar

    I hear my boys in this one winds up; the other bites. Good write

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I’m glad it reflected the brotherly rivalry so well. Thanks Ellen!

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  4. Iain Kelly avatar

    Sucked him right in. I wonder if he will regret it, or enjoy his adventure!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      He will be probably enjoy it more than Robert!

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  5. pennygadd51 avatar

    Nice work, Fatima, to describe the manipulative Robert so cleverly! Well done!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Penny!

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  6. Sascha Darlington avatar

    The siblings sound right. Well done!

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Marcus needs Robert to pull him out of his shell. Thank you Sascha!

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  7. yarnspinnerr avatar

    They also serve who stand and wait ….. alas the young are so easily goaded.

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  8. granonine avatar

    I guess dear old Dad wasn’t such a dear, was he?

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      He was alright, just liked his well-drawn lines of his comfort zones where nothing ever happens.

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  9. Dale avatar

    I love how Marcus knows exactly what to say to get him to join…
    Well done.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Dale. They know how to press each other’s buttons.

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  10. jillyfunnell avatar

    Ah, I think Marcus secretly wanted to change his mind and do the trip.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Yes a part of him does and that’s why he falls for Robert’s manipulation too. Thank you Jilly!

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