First impressions

PHOTO PROMPT © Nathan Sowers (courtesy of Dawn M. Miller)

 

Ruby Johnson hung the mirror near the front door. A special mirror that showed man’s true nature. But only on the first reflection. After that it showed up meaningless different colours like a mood ring.

Her husband’s image had glowed a brilliant white. So she married him. Her friend Nina, a dull purplish-gray. That friendship didn’t last. Now its latest revelation perplexed her.

Her son, who had till now been too short to be reflected in the mirror, turned it to a chalky black speckled with red. She did what any mother would do. She smashed the mirror to smithereens.

100 words

“Mirror, mirror on the wall. Who is the fairest of us all?” What an awesome image this week. Thanks to Nathan Sowers courtesy of Dawn Miller.

I wish I had this mirror. Wonder if it would make navigating through life easier? Unless it tells you a truth you’d rather not believe in.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less.

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Responses

  1. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    “… meaningless different colours like a mood ring.” I love that line. There are just some things a mother doesn’t want to know. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      A mother’s love hides many faults. It means a lot coming from you, that you like that line. Thank you, Rochelle!

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  2. Iain Kelly avatar

    Excellent take Fatima. Not the colour you would want to see for you child! Well done.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      And mother’s love could make her deny her son’s true nature, that may become more apparent as he grows older.

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  3. prior.. avatar

    I could feel her smashing it with her “momma-bear” side engaged.
    enjoyed your take on the image

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Without a second thought! Thank you!

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      1. prior.. avatar

        🙂
        peace

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  4. neilmacdon avatar

    Of course she smashed the mirror. And freed herself, I hope, from superstition

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I’m afraid the mirror truly was magical, and reflected the truth.

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      1. neilmacdon avatar

        Only if she let it be the truth

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      2. Fatima Fakier avatar

        Yeah, I see what you’re getting at. I had intended to use magic in this story, to reflect human nature with regards to the truth. The magic is irrelevant really. But I get what you’re saying about choice and perspective 🙂

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  5. abhiray59 avatar

    Some mirror! This is really scary.

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  6. Sandra avatar

    “Black speckled with red” sounds very sinister. Good one.

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  7. pennygadd51 avatar

    I enjoyed your story enormously! The last line had me laughing with delight! You’ve used the magic of your writer’s skill to compose this story about the unconditional nature of a mother’s love.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I’m glad it delighted you, Penny! And thank you for your wonderful feedback.

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  8. granonine avatar

    Terrifying to see black speckled with red to represent your child. Really good story.

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  9. anuragbakhshi avatar

    A mother can never accept her progeny’s truth, unfortunately.

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  10. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    Quite some mirror! I wonder what colour I’d be…

    Click to read my FriFic tale

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  11. yarnspinnerr avatar

    Ominous. Very neat write.

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  12. jillyfunnell avatar

    Not exactly what a mother would wish to see.

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  13. lisarey1990 avatar

    This is really engaging.

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  14. theministryofshrawleywalks avatar

    chalky black speckled with red!! Worrying

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  15. mjlstories avatar

    And now as a mother will she seek to change her son’s future? Spooky tale,

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  16. StuHN avatar

    Her son’s story really should continue. Nicely done

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  17. Dale avatar

    Loved this, Fatima! Of course she smashed it… and hopefully it’s “truth”…

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  18. 4963andypop avatar

    This is a lovely metaphor for many things a mother might not want to face about her own child. I can see a similar reaction in some people when they first encounter a disability diagnosis.

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  19. James McEwan avatar

    Yes, sometimes the truth in the mirror hurts.

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  20. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    I think that knowing too much can be a burden… and being a mother is nothing you can change….

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  21. Jan Morrill avatar

    Very creative story, Fatima. And the ending makes me wonder if smashing the mirror did any good?

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