He aint heavy, he’s my brother

Copyright – Adam Ickes

He waited for hours, watching. Waiting. Hidden behind a tree. Or pretending to stroll on the park lanes. People didn’t notice Thomas. Not when he asked for coins in his cup, and not as he circled this part of the park. His eyes fixed on the pair of boots abandoned on the low wall. He waited for the owner to claim them. Everyone ignored them, just as they ignored Thomas. Taking a deep breath, he crept closer and plucked them off the wall. Safely on his way, he felt pleased his brother would have a good pair of boots.

99 words

Written for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less.

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One of my favourite songs as a child.

Responses

  1. Dale avatar

    Lovely story, Fatima!

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  2. jillyfunnell avatar

    Lovely heartwarming story, Fatima and thank you for adding the man I was nuts about when I was VERY much younger!

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  3. neilmacdon avatar

    Invisibility has its benefits

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  4. oneta hayes avatar

    Original and lovely. Very well done.

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  5. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatiima,

    What a sweet story. Perhaps the boots were left there for such a time as this.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. Moon avatar

    Lovely story, Fatima. And, beautifully written, as always.

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