Ancestral treasures

PHOTO PROMPT © Renee Heath

Tshepo was silhouetted against the setting sun, beer bottle raised against the dying light. “To our success!”

“Cheers to that!” Brenda, Gift and Tshepo tipped their bottles together.

“Do you think the police will find out we stole it?” Gift whispered.

“Nah.” replied Tshepo, after some thought. “It’s not worth much anyway. Doubt anyone will miss it.”

“It is priceless to us.” said Gift, firmly.

Gogo was a great artist.” mused Brenda, gazing at its colours as a tear fell onto her cheek. “She’d be happy to know her painting is home. After all these years.”

96 words

I based this loosely on true stories of Jewish families who have had their family assets, arts and jewellery, seized by the Nazis. And whose living relatives fight court battles to reclaim these priceless treasures today.

Gogo means grandmother in some African languages, particular to the Zulu language.

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less. Submit your story by clicking the blue frog, and read more awesome flash fiction too.

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  1. Lokesh Umak avatar

    Nice flow of scene in setting

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Lokesh.

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  2. Rainyshadows avatar

    Interesting! I love African words and their philosophy on life.

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    1. Rainyshadows avatar

      I have heard of gogo from an anime. Now I know its from africa 🙂

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      1. Fatima Fakier avatar

        I think the word itself may have origins in many languages with different meanings. 🤔 thank you for stopping by!

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      2. Rainyshadows avatar

        thats interesting and just to think how many true deserving artists have been plundered of their fame and most importantly a part of their soul is disheartening

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  3. ceayr avatar

    I like that they are taking back their culture, Fatima.

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  4. neilmacdon avatar

    The theft of their culture is, sadly, a story many peoples around the world can tell

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  5. Iain Kelly avatar

    A shame it had to be stolen to be re-appropriated, but it feels like they did the right thing.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      It is a great reflection of your integrity and values that you pointed this out! Trying to rectify historical crimes is no easy task. And I’m with you on the stealing thing. Most people take the legal route.

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  6. Susan A Eames avatar

    Lovely take on the photo prompt, Fatima.

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  7. Brenda's Thoughts avatar

    Too much of history is severely unjust. Glad the artwork is back in its rightful hands. =)

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  8. plaridel avatar

    i guess they had to do what they needed to do. it was worth the risk.

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  9. StuHN avatar

    Money is not only the true appraisal of worth. Nice tale

    T.P. : #FridayFictioneers

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  10. pennygadd51 avatar

    I like the way you tell this story obliquely, revealing a little at a time. Very skilful! It’s an original take on the prompt, too!

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  11. lisarey1990 avatar

    Really great take. Original and very well-written.

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  12. Abhijit Ray avatar

    So they have recaptured their possession that was stolen earlier.

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  13. Jelli avatar

    Love the path you chose to walk with this one… the returning of treasures. I remember how overwhelmingly joyed, and sad, I felt when a treasured possession that had been my Gr. Grandfather’s (stolen and sold by family at his death) was returned to me many years later. There aren’t really words to express correctly the feelings… Thank you for the memory! 🙂 ❤

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      How wonderful that my story reflects your family history too!

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  14. Mrs Marian Green avatar

    Very interesting take on the prompt. And well written . I liked it.

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  15. Liz Young avatar

    Good for them – they took a risk but got back what was rightfully theirs.

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  16. granonine avatar

    We feel the sadness, the sense of history, the evil of the marauders who usurped the right to others’ possessions. Wish it would all end. Repercussions down through the generations.

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  17. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    What a shame they have to steal back what is rightfully there. I appreciated this piece very much. brava!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  18. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    The way art was seized was disgusting…. often a painting represents so much more than its worth for those who has memories attached to it.

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  19. gahlearner avatar

    I love this. In only a few words you sketch the characters so well. They brought the treasured art back into the family, not an easy task and it obviously needed desperate measures. It is part of the atrocities–with the Nazis, and elsewhere: wiping out the whole culture, people, memories, art…

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  20. Inside the Mind of Isadora avatar

    Unfortunately, treasures are sometimes lost forever. I’m sure they felt relief to have had this one. Tragic but you wrote it with dignity, Fatima. Nicely done 😊
    Isadora 😎

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