Transform

 

 

Dust off those dreams and ideals spiked long ago

When your caged heart was free and lived with gusto.

With the Pen in your grasp

Switch genres, change the title and unclasp

the yoke around your neck.

Write one word, then never look back.

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In my google search, it turns out a quadrille is also a dance.

I was not familiar with the use of the verb ‘spike’ as in rejecting something. Usually used in publishing where a manuscript is considered and then rejected and put on the spike. So I thought I’d use it in my attempt at a quadrille.

This was nothing short of a mental crossfit workout… Hope you enjoy it.

Written for dVerse.

 

 

 

 

 

Responses

  1. Abhijit Ray avatar

    When words start flowing, there is no looking back.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Abhijit.

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  2. whimsygizmo avatar

    Well done! It’s not easy to balance rhyme in a quadrille (and yes, it IS a dance! Also of words.) 🙂
    Loved this, especially:
    “When your caged heart was free and lived with gusto”

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      It definitely stretched my brain for sure! I’m glad you connected with my poetry. Thanks for reading.

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  3. SilverGardenia avatar

    I haven’t run into that form of spike either. Glad you used it! I like learning new words/definitions.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      If you’re anything like me, new definitions and words tumble in my mind for a long time. Thank you for stopping by!

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  4. Frank Hubeny avatar

    Nice last line.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Frank 🙂

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    I like the idea of using that meaning of spiked to describe the resilience to continue to write in the face of rejection

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      I like exploring new meanings… thank you, Björn.

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