A pair of tools

PHOTO PROMPT © Anshu Bhojnagarwala

 

“What’s happened to my piano?” Sanjeev gaped at the musical intrument filled with soil.

“Firstly, it’s mine. You sold it to me. Second, – ” said Rakesh.

“If I knew you were going to violate it, I wouldn’t have!”

“Violate? Do not be coarse with me. I am an artist.  A medium. A tool of God, I -”

“Oh you’re a tool alright! This was an antique. Pure Ebony. Real ivory. Mahogany wood.”

“And yet, you got rid of it.”

A pause. “Had a gambling debt.”

Rakesh hands him a shovel. “Long handle. Strong steel. Unused. Perfect to beat yourself up with.”

99 words

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less. Submit to the link below and join in!

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  1. Abhijit Ray avatar

    Why dis Rakesh spoil the piano?

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      It was his artistic expression, 🙂

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  2. neilmacdon avatar

    The voices in this dialogue are spot on

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Neil!

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  3. the dark netizen avatar

    Hahaha! 😀
    Fun read! 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Glad you liked it 🙂

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  4. Iain Kelly avatar

    Ha, great title and story 😉

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Iain!

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  5. pennygadd51 avatar

    Lovely humorous writing, Fatima. There could be a series of stories in those two characters!

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  6. Susan A Eames avatar

    He he – great final lines, Fatima!

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  7. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    I’m not sure I would agree with Rakesh on this one. Amusing story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  8. Dale avatar

    This was so well done, Fatima. I really enjoyed the voices.

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  9. Keith's Ramblings avatar

    I could almost hear them! Excellent.

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  10. Shirley McCann avatar

    Great story. Guess he should have known, once he sells it, it no longer belongs to him.

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  11. plaridel avatar

    i suppose, the shovel could also be used for burying someone. 🙂

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  12. James McEwan avatar

    Nice story, it reflects how some people do not know the value of quality.

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  13. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) avatar

    Actually the world is filled with pianos… so making something new of it makes sense to me… I think Rakesh can get a new one for free.

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  14. gahlearner avatar

    What a clever, fun story. Great dialogue, great characters, I love it.

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  15. granonine avatar

    Great dialogue, and I love that last exchange.

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