Lost in translation

PHOTO PROMPT © Ronda Del Boccio

 

Sue sighed exasperatedly at her husband. “This is hardly romantic, Rakesh.”

He squinted at the tourist map of Venice, holding it under the streetlamp but his head kept blocking out the light casting a shadow over it. “Hmmm…”

“We’ve been wandering for hours. It is dark already. We are lost. Just admit it.”

Just then, loud shouts erupted from a nearby cafe, “Basta! Basta!”

“What do you think is happening over there?” Sue stretched her neck to glimpse some of the action.

“I’m not sure.” said Rakesh, scratching his beard. “But it sounds as if they want more pasta.”

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**** Basta means “that’s enough” in Italian. Usually used in a firm tone to put a stop to something.

Okay, okay this was as cheesy as the mozarella on your pizza. Nonetheless, hope you enjoyed it. The prompt reminded me of when I wandered the dark calles of Venice once. Not a good idea.

Written for Friday fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Write a story in 100 words or less. Click the link to add your flash fiction and join the party.

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  1. neilmacdon avatar

    Of such misunderstandings wars can be made

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      For sure! Especially if one is as wrongfully confident as Rakesh.

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  2. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    I don’t think Rakesh should check out the “pasta.” 😉 Enjoyable story…I like cheese.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Unfortunately, he just might do so. Thank you, Rochelle. At least you got your calcium dose for the week 😉

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  3. Susan A Eames avatar

    Ha ha – nice little vignette!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      ha ha! Thank you, Susan! Glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. Iain Kelly avatar

    Venice is really an easy place to get lost in, even with a map. Good fun 🙂

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Oh it really is!

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  5. Dale avatar

    A little cheese once and again is good, Fatima!
    Fun stuff.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Yeah and the calcium content helps too! Glad it worked for you, Dale.

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  6. Sabio Lantz avatar

    Funny story — love the linguistic stuff. I don’t see the relationship to the photo, though.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Glad to tickle your funny bone, Sabio. Admittedly, it is wild inspiration here. But as Rochelle advises with a Thoreau quote, “It’s not what you look at that matters, it’s what you see.” It is individual interpretation which is what makes it fun.

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  7. ceayr avatar

    Amusing story.
    Is the photo at the top of your page the Venice bookshop with the gondola inside?

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you. It is a bookshop in Venice which I didn’t get to enter. I snapped the pic in a hurry. while on a walking tour. There might have been a gondola inside…

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  8. subroto avatar

    Ha! Ha! If he is not careful she is going to give him a hard gnocchi on the head.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Ha! If not her, then somebody else for sure.

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  9. gahlearner avatar

    This was fun, right down to the little details (head between lamp and map… LOL).

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Oh I’m so glad you picked that bit up! It was meant to be dorky and fun. Thank you 😊

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  10. Violet Lentz avatar

    Nicely written scene, and I loved the little backstory you wrote for it as well.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Violet 🙂

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  11. Abhijit Ray avatar

    Rakesh is in trouble. It is dark, he is lost and he does not speak Italian. Plus his companion is upset. Not a great combination of things to happen.

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    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Yeah he gets himself into a lot of trouble at times.

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  12. Brenda's Thoughts avatar

    Nice story and reminds me of many a trip for my husband and I. =)

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  13. Fatima Fakier avatar

    You two must have such fun together! Thank you, Brenda.

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