Pictures are worth a thousand words

PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz

 

Pictures are worth a thousand words, thought Henry. Clearly, a thousand words are not enough.

The funeral was just as his mother would have liked it. Simple.

He leafed through her photo album. Many of him and his siblings as children. Some of his parents, laughing, smiling. Caught unawares. Of course, he didn’t find what he was looking for. There were none of her first family. The husband and autistic child she abandoned.

He committed to finding his half-brother. Maybe she couldn’t handle it. He certainly wanted to try. Especially now that his own daughter had received the same diagnosis.

100 words

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge is to write a story in 100 words or less. Click the frog to submit your flash fiction and to read others’.

bigfred

Responses

  1. neilmacdon avatar

    killer last line, Fatima

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Iain Kelly avatar

    Good work Fatima, a powerful story. So glad his mindset is different to her mother.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Yes, he is an apple that fell a little further out from the tree 😉 Thanks, Iain.

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Mike avatar

    A story to make one think, well told

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Mike.

      Like

  4. rochellewisoff avatar

    Dear Fatima,

    A powerful and well-layered story. ”

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Rochelle. 🙂

      Like

  5. Inside the Mind of Isadora avatar

    His determination is felt in your story, Fatima.
    A well executed story.
    Isadora 😎

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      Thank you, Isadora.

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Tannille avatar

    It’s so easy to judge people. I found myself doing it with the mother. Great story.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Fatima Fakier avatar

      It is human nature, part of finding our way in the world to judge others. But it can also be very limiting to oneself. Thank you, Tannille.

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Tracey at Whatsfordinnerdoc.com and TraceyDelaplainMD.com avatar

    It’s interesting to realize that my parents have taken their secrets to the grave. I wish I had asked more questions but then again, maybe I really was never supposed to know. I have secrets that my sons will never know.
    Thought provoking, thanks.
    Tracey

    Like

  8. Dale avatar

    Makes us wonder how he/she found out there was a half-sibling…
    And the secrets families keep…

    Like

  9. Laurie Bell avatar

    Oh gosh… I sure hope they find the half brother. Sounds like the investigation will be worth the painful memories

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Lynn Love avatar

    As Neil said, a killer last line. The pain comes through the words so very clearly. Well done

    Like

Leave a reply to Laurie Bell Cancel reply